Talk:Grant Hermanns/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 22:39, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:24, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 17:50, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Expand lead.
- Expanded lead.
Full name in body
- Done.
His weight in the infobox has no reference.
The note says "Listed in some sources as 305 pounds (138 kg)." Please add the references to that note.
- Given that PFR and Purdue both list him at 305, I removed 300 and the note and put 305.
New high school infobox formatting.
- Done.
Remove 2023 from Bucs in infobox.
- Done.
Remove "as of" from infobox. Not on a team.
- Done.
Body doesn't say where he was born.
- Not sure if he was born in Albuquerque, or if he just grew up there. PFR is blank for birthplace; Purdue doesn't specify where he was born.
Body doesn't say where Rio Rancho High is.
"In 2013, he won first place at the high school research exposition in chemistry/biochemistry" What grade was he was in?
- Sophomore, maybe, since he enrolled at Purdue in 2016 (i.e. he'd be soph 2013, junior 2014, sen 2015) – that's just me guessing, though...
"He eventually recovered and played in six matches of the season" change to "He eventually recovered and played in six games that season
- Done.
"he was given all-metro and all-state honors" In the previous paragraph All-Metro and All-State were capitilized, so change it to one or the other.
- Done.
"liver enzymes" link for that?
- Done.
"but within time got closer to normal" change got to something else.
- Changed to 'became' – does that work?
"He redshirted his first year" link redshirted
- Done.
"He was named team captain" link
- Done.
"Purdue's COVID shortened season" link to the 2020 Purdue football team
- Done.
"and an Honorable Mention All-Big Ten conference player" change to "and his first Honorable Mention All-Big Ten conference mention"
- I changed it to and was named honorable mention All-Big Ten – does that work?
Lowercase NFL Draft
- Boo!
Link Pro Day in pre draft box
- Done.
"He was waived at the final roster cuts, on August 31," change to "He was waived during final roster cuts on August 31,"
- Done.
"future contract" someone needs to add that to the Glossary of American football terms so we can start linking it. I thought about it before but I'm not sure what to say.
- I'll have to think of a wording for that...
"and made his NFL debut in the match" change match to contest
- Done.
"He was waived on August 29" add 2023 there I guess
- Done.
"As a sophomore in 2018, Hermanns appeared in nine games, all as a starter" sounds like he missed some games then?
- Hmm... Purdue just says that he started nine games – changed it to that.
His Purdue bio said he majored in industrial management. Add to article.
- Done.
His Purdue bio said his "Mother, Kelli, played volleyball at Chabot College". Add to article.
- Done.
Any draft projections?
- Didn't see any.

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 17:50, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:26, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I did a spot check of the sources and didn't find any more issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:56, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.