Talk:Grant's Canal/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll grab this one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66 - I'm going to be withdrawing this for now, per issues identified on the article talk page. I'm about to go on wikibreak for a week, so I won't be able to address those issues for awhile. Hog Farm _Bacon 17:31, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

No rush, I can sit on this until whenever you're ready, so long as it's sometime before the end of January.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:21, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

It'll be done well before then. Hog Farm _Bacon 17:29, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66 - I've made the adjustments to this one, and I'm back online, so this one and the 13th Mo. Cavalry Regiment are ready to be reviewed when you're ready. Hog Farm _Bacon 20:11, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

• restored the river course to passing by Vicksburg awkward
  • Rephrased
• Commanding General of the United States Army Winfield Scott This is such a long title that I think it read better if the name came first with his title set off by commas
  • Done
• Trailing comma on Louisiana, repeatedly
  • Found and corrected several instances
• Comma after De Soto Point
  • Added
• infantrymen would not be released Would or could?
  • Would not. I think it's a bit out of the scope of this article, but the Union efforts against Vicksburg were hampered at times by Henry Halleck, who was mostly incompetent and had a drinking problem that rivalled Grant's.
• promoted by the practice of both gathering drinking water and dumping raw sewage into the Mississippi River awkward
  • Done
• 160 feet (49 m) sections hyphenate by adding |adj=on to the template
  • Done
• making the section each--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:43, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Sturmvogel 66 - I think I've caught all of these. Hog Farm _Talk 04:10, 19 January 2021 (UTC)