Talk:Grace Wisnewski

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A fact from Grace Wisnewski appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 28 July 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski's bottom-ranked team upset the defending league champions when she scored what an A-League statistician called an "acrobatic" 99th-minute equalising goal?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/July. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Grace Wisnewski.

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:02, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Grace Wisnewski joined the first women's team of her favourite football club?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Paper Mario: The Origami King

Created by Fixer88 (talk) and Kingsif (talk). Nominated by Kingsif (talk) at 00:40, 22 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Grace Wisnewski; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: --evrik ^(talk) 01:31, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not thrilled with the hook, so I am suggesting this:

ALt1 ... that in 2019, New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski won the Golden Ball as player of the tournament at the OFC U-19 Women's Championship?

"Junior Football Ferns squad announced for U-20 Women's World Cup Costa Rica". New Zealand Football. 26 July 2022.

--evrik ^(talk) 01:31, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Also not wild about the original, but the proposed alternate isn't better. evrik, if you want to reinstate your approval of the original, do feel free. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 01:41, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Fixer88 and Kingsif: any help? --evrik ^(talk) 01:55, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Evrik: I think alt1 is fine, though a simple statement, but I just found an article about an apparently incredible goal, so I'll add that to the article and see about a hook for that. Kingsif (talk) 02:02, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

ALT2: ... that New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski scored an "acrobatic" 99th-minute equalising goal for her bottom-ranked side to upset the defending league champions, the latest regulation time goal in the league's history?
ALT2a: ... that New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski scored an "acrobatic" 99th-minute equalising goal for her bottom-ranked side to upset the defending league champions?
ALT2b: ... that New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski scored, what A-League statistician Andrew Howe called, an "acrobatic" 99th-minute equalising goal for her bottom-ranked side to upset the defending league champions, the latest regulation time goal in the league's history?
ALT2c: ... that New Zealand footballer Grace Wisnewski scored, what A-League statistician Andrew Howe called, an "acrobatic" 99th-minute equalising goal for her bottom-ranked side to upset the defending league champions?

@Evrik: if it's too wordy, it can end at "champions". Kingsif (talk) 02:16, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Theleekycauldron: can you move this to prep 7? --evrik ^(talk) 01:14, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Leaving it to the promoter. --evrik ^(talk) 02:18, 22 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @evrik: "acrobatic" needs to be attributed per WP:INTEXT. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 01:20, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Theleekycauldron: - Done. --evrik ^(talk) 01:44, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @evrik: in the hook as well? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 01:51, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Theleekycauldron: - Done.--evrik ^(talk) 01:55, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]