Talk:Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79

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Review: November 12, 2015. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79 appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 31 October 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that John Eliot Gardiner performed Bach's cantatas for Reformation Day in the Schloßkirche, Wittenberg, including Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2012/October. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79.

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Infobox?

Something like this? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:32, 6 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

done --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:31, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Gott der Herr ist Sonn und Schild, BWV 79/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:52, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll finish this one soon JAGUAR 13:52, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
"his third year as Thomaskantor" - should this be italicised, per some other articles?

"Bach began the libretto for the feast" - which feast?

"the first of these hymns was sung regularly after the sermon on Reformation Day in Leipzig" - needs a link

"As Hofmann points out" - sounds a bit informal. Perhaps this could be As Hofmann asserted
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Once again this article has been exceptionally good. I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, well done! JAGUAR 22:55, 12 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-GAN polish

"...and including the first stanza from Martin Rinckart's hymn "Nun danket alle Gott" and as the closing chorale the final stanza of Ludwig Helmbold's hymn "Nun laßt uns Gott dem Herren" -- doesn't quite make sense. I don't want to adjust it as I don't know what to adjust it to. Any ideas Gerda? Cassianto ^Talk 20:47, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I split the sentence, better? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:05, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]