Talk:Got the Life/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 05:48, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• Lead

It was recorded in April of 1998 -> WP:MONTHS

• Done - Fixed

• Background and release

revolved around the mixed blessings of fame. -> Sounds like a copy-paste.

• Done - quoted and published author

Stephen Thomas Erlewine need a wikilink elsewhere in the article

• Done - linked

The single also apprehends B-sides -> they could go on the infobox too.

• It is, but won't show up

• Music video

the video album that -> maybe the video album where?

• Done - reworded

• Reception

Allmusic -> Not need to be in italics.

• Done - removed italics

Erlewine's comment is in two sections.

• Done - removed comment

on MTV's Total Request Live -> In the previous section it says "Executives from TRL said", so this must be inverted.

• Done - changed both to MTV's Total Request Live

and on January 12, 1999, the music video was officially declared the first video that retired from MTV -> Repeated too.

• Done - removed

Also, January 12, 2009, had not been mentioned.

• Done - added to section

On ref 22 TRL (or MTV Networks) publish the archive.

• Done

• Composition

song on Follow the Leader -> overlinked

• Done - unlinked

on Follow the Leader. Like Follow the Leader -> synonyms needed

• Done

• Chart performance

Alfabethic order only.

• Done

Australian ref is failing (but I checked it at Ultratop so there's no problem for now. If it is persistent change it.)

• I don't see how this fails (archived just in case)

References 29 and 30 need accessdate and if its possible publisher

• Done

• References and notes

Both are inverted (In this article the references should be the notes and vice versa).

• Done - Changed to "Literature" and "Cited"

• General

1 dab link

• Done' - repaired dab

I've checked it, on hold until July 18, 2010 (UTC). Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 05:48, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

• Everything is done. CrowzRSA ^{15:20, 8 July 2010 (UTC)}

• Everything was done, well done, the article pass its nomination. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 16:30, 8 July 2010 (UTC)