Talk:Google Chrome/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 15:36, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues:

Lede: The lede is very too small. Please, summarize the full article, for every section
Do Not Track: Is in need of expanding
Malware blocking: This section is out-of-date. Please update it
Usage: Chrome overtook Firefox in November 2011. As of May 2012, StatCounter measured Chrome and MSIE at roughly 32% usage share each, with Firefox at 26%. the third reference after shouldn't be spaced. That is Ref. 224
References: Ref. 4, 149 - Isn't a good source
References: Ref. 19 - Should be Google Blog as the publisher
References: Ref. 43, 54 - Googlechromereleases.blogspot.com should be Google Chrome Blog
References: Ref. 59 - chrome.blogspot.com should be Chrome Blog
References: Ref. 73 - chrome.blogspot.com.au should be Chrome Blog Australia
References: Ref. 94 - Ref. 94 is a dead link. See here.
References: Ref. 123 - Ref. 123 needs an accessdate. See here.
References: Ref. 132 - Ref. 132 is a dead link. See [1].
References: Ref. 139 - Ref. 139 is a dead link. See here.
References: Ref. 141 - Ref. 141 is a dead link. See here.
References: Ref. 145 - Ref. 145 is a dead link. See here.
References: Various - Missing publishers

On hold for now. TBran dl ey 15:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Patched ref issues (diff). Any other glaring problems before I start on the prose? --Nathan2055^{talk - contribs} 18:52, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No. TBran dl ey 19:54, 14 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I don't agree. For a start:

The are a lot of short paragraphs, mostly three sentences long; and single paragraph sections /subsections.
There are "direct quotations" with no citations, for example: two in History, the first paragraph in Development, several in Release channels and updates, one in Retina screen support, two in Usage,
Ref 226 is using wikipedia as a reference.
Some of the references are blogs, which brings into question as to whether they are WP:RS, arguably some are as they are official company blogs, but are all of them reliable?
Its already stated above that there are references with missing published, some of them have named authors and those are missing as well, for example 17, 40, 46, etc.

Pyrotec (talk) 14:51, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No issues have been addressed for a while now. I'll have to fail this nomination. Sorry! Please re-nominate after those above concerns have been addressed. TBran dl ey 03:47, 12 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]