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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:16, 2 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Any chance you'll get to this soon? Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:23, 8 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • The image is quite low-res, maybe a little too much? A better image perhaps?
 Not done As always, would it be possible for you to do it for me? I'm not very familiar with this.
  • The intro sentence should mention Party Never Ends and both albums should be linked
 Done
  • "Featuring the vocal collaboration" --> "Featuring the vocals"
 Done
  • I think "consumption" reads awkwardly
 Done
  • You should switch info on the video and reception around just like how it appears in the article
 Done
  • I wouldn't consider its peaks a "minor success"
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  • "sitecom" --> "sitcom"
 Done
  • "Inna and Pitbull previously collaborated on a song called "All The Things", which was featured on the latter's 2013 extended play Meltdown.[2][3]" --> This is pretty trivial but could likely be reworded to be more encyclopedic and more useful among all of the article's content
 Done
  • "released simultaneously" --> simultaneously with what?
 Done
  • " 69 cent" --> "69 cents" and make sure you make note of that being USD currency
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  • The seven sources back-to-back in the "Composition" section are quite overwhelming
 Not done Maybe they seem overwhelming at the first sight, but they cite different thing in this sentence; one of them cite its genre, one the lyrical message, etc...
  • MetroLyrics isn't a good source to use within an article
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  • "song's "entertaining" lyrics "Say he ho..." --> "song's "entertaining" lyrics: "Say he ho..."
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  • "Commercially, "Good Time" experienced minor success on European record charts. --> Same as what I mentioned in the lead
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  • What country does the "Airplay 100" belong to?
 Done there was "native", which made sure it was for Romania. But now, as I think about it, I changed it to "Romania's", as Pitbull's American
  • "spawn" --> "span"
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  • Note A should be included in this section as a sentence instead of as a note, since the lead sentence is confusing to read
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  • "lyrics video" --> generally called "lyric video"
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  • "performing a choreography" --> "performing choreography"
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  • "Website Hitfire" --> "Hitfire" (Look below for more)
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  • "They went on" --> "The website went on"
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  • Make a note that Inna was the one who sang "Endless"
 Done Added a "her" before the song's name
  • In the references, "iTunes Store" should not be italicized
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@Carbrera: Thanks you so much for your review. I have done all your comments and even responded to some of them. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:23, 10 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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