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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- No DABs, external link good.
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Capitalize torpedo cruiser in the infobox
- Done
- Suggest that you use feet and inches rather than decimal feet.
- Fixed
- Suggest that you move the note to the Header caption in the infobox, like this: (Goito) with the rest of the note the same.
- Done
- Suggest that you spell out metric tons for all measurements as the 't' looks odd when contrasted to the spelled out other measurements.
- Done
- typo: THey had a crew
- Good catch
- three steam engines each driving Comma after engines
- Done
- In 1894, Goito had her center engine and screw removed and her original boilers replaced with coal-fired models The original boilers were also coal-fired.
- Good catch, should've been oil-fired
- Link fore-and-aft rig, reserve
- Done
- Hyphenate medium caliber and clarify that cal. is the abbreviation for caliber
- Done
- Have you checked the info in the last two volumes of Warship on actions in the Adriatic during WW2 for any further activities?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- I assume you mean WWI, but no, I don't have them. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 16:03, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- Then you should run out and get them pronto! What matters more, your kids' college educations or Wiki?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:42, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- They're on my Amazon wishlist... ;) Parsecboy (talk) 16:44, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- And the effective range of an excuse is ...?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:53, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- They're on my Amazon wishlist... ;) Parsecboy (talk) 16:44, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- Then you should run out and get them pronto! What matters more, your kids' college educations or Wiki?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:42, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- I assume you mean WWI, but no, I don't have them. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 16:03, 20 June 2016 (UTC)