Talk:God Put a Smile upon Your Face/GA1
GA Review
[edit]- Lead
- "This album has been released with the Copy Control protection system in some regions." I don't understand why this is relevant. Secondly, it's in the lead but not in the main body. Thirdly one of the cats is Category:Copy Control albums but I don't understand why when it's not an album.
- To be honest, when I started working on the article, that was mentioned in the lead. I didn't know whether to leave it or remove it. I wanted to remove it, but, I don't know if I should. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:44, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've removed it. It adds nothing at all to the song. It's more about the album. Peanut4 (talk) 21:52, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:03, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've removed it. It adds nothing at all to the song. It's more about the album. Peanut4 (talk) 21:52, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- To be honest, when I started working on the article, that was mentioned in the lead. I didn't know whether to leave it or remove it. I wanted to remove it, but, I don't know if I should. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:44, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Release
- "The song was later released on 21 July 2003." Does this mean in countries other than US and Canada.
- Yup and mentioned it after the date. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:44, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- When was it released in the UK? Peanut4 (talk) 21:51, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Added date. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:03, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- When was it released in the UK? Peanut4 (talk) 21:51, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yup and mentioned it after the date. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:44, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- "Promo singles were released for in the UK and US." I presume this should be "released for" or "released in"
- Fixed. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:44, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
Only a couple of things, but I'll put it on hold for now. Peanut4 (talk) 21:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Passes all the criteria and the one image is fine. There's not much more I can add really. All the best with any further improvements. Peanut4 (talk) 22:09, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the review. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:13, 18 September 2008 (UTC)