Talk:Glenn Close/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- "most nominated" → "most-nominated"
Early life and family
[edit]- This section looks good.
Career
[edit]Theatre
[edit]- Remove the comma after "began performing in 1974".
- Add serial commas after the second use of "violin", Martin Short, and "Julia".
- Avoid the repetitive use of the "In [year], [event]" formula in several sections.
- Add a comma after "During the production".
- Remove the comma after "Best Musical Performance".
- Comma after "February 9, 2017" per WP:DATECOMMA.
- Comma after the first use of The Guardian.
- Avoid single-sentence paragraphs.
Film
[edit]- Several paragraphs are missing sources.
- Fix the "citation needed" issues.
- Remove the comma after "attached to the role".
- Remove the comma after "for this performance".
- "stellar reviews" needs more verification with additional sources.
- Several paragraphs also lack sources here.
- Commas after sentences starting with "In the film".
Television
[edit]- Paragraphs. Need. Sources.
- "highly rated" → "highly-rated"
- The phrase "highly-rated" also needs a source.
- "that network" → "that the network"
- Comma after "in addition".
- "open to do" doesn't sound encyclopedic.
- "half hour" → "half-hour"
Reception, acting style, and legacy
[edit]- Comma after Bridget Fonda.
- Other than that, this section looks good.
Personal life
[edit]- Remove the comma after the second use of "Bozeman".
- Add a comma after Angus King.
Activism
[edit]- "which performed" → "that performed"
Acting credits and awards
[edit]- Expand this section with some mentions of awards and selected filmography.
References
[edit]- Properly cite sources.
- Several citations are missing authors/websites/dates.
- Avoid using ALL-CAPS per WP:ALLCAPS and WP:SHOUT.
- Also avoid having ".com" in the website parameters.
- Page Six is not reliable per WP:NYPOST.
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
Progress
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- Notes
- @Film Enthusiast: You there? I'll give this nom another week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Hi there, yes my bad. I got caught up with the other article that I forgot to work on this one. Hopefully I'll be able to make enough progress during the timeframe. Thanks for the extension. Film Enthusiast (talk) 18:24, 11 May 2021 (UTC)