Talk:Giving You Up/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:02, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

~~This article is more or less in a good shape. I am going to do some minor adjustments as I go. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:36, 4 June 2015 (UTC)~~[reply]

Strike that, I'm quick failing this. While undertaking the task which I thought was minor amendments and an easy GA, the article is so full of errors that it would actually require a new completely rewrite. Please see the glaring errors below.

Infobox needs all {{flat list}} templates.
There is a jarring tag for non-free audio sample which uses such a long time rather than the 10% of song's length per WP:SAMPLE.
The lead section where the composition is written is WP:OR since it is not present in body.
The background section is a bloated advertisement for the parent compilation album Ultimate Kylie with its chart placements and song releases without any information on "Giving You Up"'s background.
Composition is sourced from some shady website called Dusk411 which is user generated content.
Same for release details, including product websites like mixkylie.co.uk
About.com, which is not supposed to be used anywhere
All the chart history references are repeated twice, once in the chart performance section as well as the {{singlechart}} generated references when they can be easily combined.
Coming to MOS, ample usage of normal dashes where en-dash should have been used.

Although a short article, the nominator should have spent some time on this and the nominator hardly spent even 1 hour on this. Figures, well failed and better luck cleaning this up. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 12:57, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: – Ok, thank you for the review anyway. Sorry about that, It was a bit of a "drive-through" nomination. Didn't take much notice of it that much. Will work on it more :)