Talk:Girl with Ball/GA1
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Lead is way too short. Needs to be expanded on.
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Detail --> Description
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Critical review --> Reception
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- I see no other issues with the article. It is well referenced and written.
- Great. All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Statυs (talk) 16:57, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- comment
Too much copyvio in the footnoted quotes . Author should figure out what the quotes are saying and use his own words in explaining. MathewTownsend (talk) 21:38, 26 July 2012 (UTC)