Talk:Gil Carmichael/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:12, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

• Image appropriately licensed
• Link ensign
  • Done.
• He established a Volkswagen dealership in 1961 and acquired Audi and Mercedes vehicles This is unclear, I'd read it that he expanded the dealership to cover the Audi and Mercedes brands. Is that correct?
  • Yes, clarified.
• Spotchecks made, no issues
• Nicely done--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:36, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

• @Sturmvogel 66: I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 04:24, 9 June 2022 (UTC)