Talk:Gibraltar at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games/GA1
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:08, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
A good article, and should be a GA with some tweaking
- It is reasonably well written.
- MoS suggests not to have bold wikilinks.
- Done
- competed at the >> competed in the
- What's wrong with this? It's grammatically correct.
- "which is responsible for the Commonwealth Games and Commonwealth Youth Games in Gibraltar." - This can be rather moved to the background section.
- It's already there. Lead is supposed to be a summary of whole article.
- "The Association selected ... different sports." Needs copy-editing. I would prefer "The Association selected a delegation of five male competitors, who participated in eleven events of three different sports."
- Done
- "semifinal of 200 m" - 200 m what???
- Done
- where he >> in which he
- Done
- athletics competitor - competitors should be plural
- Done
- Tell that Frank Warwick is a cyclist
- Done
- It seems that Sanderson participated in five events, and not six
- Done
- Link British Columbia
- Done
- 23.25 seconds, 23.25 minutes, 23.25 hours, or 23.25 days? :P
- Done
- Link the sports to Athletics at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games, Cycling at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games and Swimming at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games
- That will be overlinking as there are already corresponding "See also" in each section.
- The pictograms in the section headings should come first before the sport name
- Done
- Add the key for Q
- Done
- Link the athletes at least once.
- Athletes are non-notable as per Wikipedia standards of notability. No point of linking their names with a red-link.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- "The country has ... since then." is unsourced
- Done
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Good luck!!! ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:35, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Thanks Vibhi. — Bill william comptonTalk 17:09, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
- Article passed. Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 09:09, 9 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Vibhi. — Bill william comptonTalk 17:09, 8 November 2012 (UTC)