Talk:Ghost in the Shell (manga)/GA1
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 01:54, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello. I'll be reviewing this article and search for possible issues before passing to GA.
- First of all, the lead section is too small. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section where it recommends splitting content. I would suggest also adding details to avoid short paragraphs.
- The word tankōbon should be written in italics.
- More criticism could be used in the reception section but it looks acceptable.
The rest of the article seems fine to me. I look forward to see the issues fixed.
- How about leading zeros and unnecessary all CAPs. DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 04:18, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
- That is important to. I hope User:ChrisGualtieri or somebody else check it.Tintor2 (talk) 23:31, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- Well.. I know the leading zeros are part of how the book is actually presented and faithfulness to the chapter title is being followed here. As for the all caps - I think it is pretty annoying and unusual, but this was a big issue with Ryulong - I know he's gone, but I'd rather third opinions form on that content matter because I don't have the time or energy to deal with something a year from now about this. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:12, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
- That is important to. I hope User:ChrisGualtieri or somebody else check it.Tintor2 (talk) 23:31, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- Now it's a bit better but it is a small lead where I don't know what to split. If you are still busy, should I fail the review and wait for the next time? Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 15:31, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
I am failing this review due to issues. Hopefully, it will be renominated without any of them.Tintor2 (talk) 01:34, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
- Takes months to get a review, happens on vacation and now I'll have to wait months more for a simple thing which can take me an hour to rewrite - tops. Whatever... I nominated this for the anniversary and it took two months to get a review.... and I do not have the time to play these games. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:00, 15 April 2015 (UTC)