Talk:Gesche Schünemann/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:27, 20 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 02:27, 20 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

The motto doesn't seem to fit where it is, and I'm not convinced it needs to be in the article.
"national league offers were cancelled" can this be put in a bit more detail? If she was given offers that were later rescinded, maybe note the teams.
"by the team the United States," reword to "by the United States team"

Article on hold, will pass when fixed. Wizardman 21:15, 21 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the first and third issues (well spotted). Regrettably, my source does not say what Bendeslegia clubs were interested. Und war auch Grund dafür, dass sie Angebote aus der Bundesliga absagen "And was also reason that the offers from the Bundesliga were cancelled." Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:16, 21 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No problem; looks good now, article passes. Wizardman 23:19, 21 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]