Talk:German torpedo boat T29/GA1
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 17:13, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 17:13, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
Not much to nitpick here:
- There's a missing citation - see the tag
- The last paragraph is a bit long - suggest splitting it somewhere (yeah, I know, that's going to be a pain to unbundle that citation at the end)
- I think "amongst" tends to be more BrEng - "among" is more prevalent in AmEng
Parsecboy (talk) 17:36, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
- This bilingual thing is a PITA; can't remember what's whose. Thanks for reviewing amidst your steamroller of articles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:23, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
- Tell me about it - I'm dealing with the same thing at Dunkerque-class battleship right now...happy to promote now. Parsecboy (talk) 13:02, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
- This bilingual thing is a PITA; can't remember what's whose. Thanks for reviewing amidst your steamroller of articles.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:23, 24 May 2019 (UTC)