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A fact from German torpedo boat T23 appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 December 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that instead of meeting the blockade runner MV Alsterufer at a fixed rendezvous point in the Atlantic Ocean, the German torpedo boat T23 encountered two British cruisers?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2018/December. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/German torpedo boat T23.

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:46, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Little to nitpick here:

link English Channel
- Linked in the lede
is the 4th Torpedo Boat Flotilla likely to be notable? If so, redlink. Same for 5th and 6th.
"as the German ships turned" could do with comma after it
is the 8th Destroyer Flotilla likely to be notable? If so, redlink. Same for 6th Destroyer Flotilla later.
Bremen is in italics, but shouldn't it be linked instead?
at the end of the first para of Subsequent activities it ends abruptly, and I am left wondering what the outcome was for the various ships that were damaged. Could some more material be added to summarise the outcomes?
- The fate of T32 was the only one not explicitly covered and I've added a note for her.
"returned to transport 20,000" escort rather than transport? I assume she was not involved in transport that number?
a mention of the end of the war would be useful, as we are suddenly seeing her allocated to the British.
images seem ok.

That's me done. Placing on hold for the minor matters above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:18, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

- All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:23, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:39, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]