Talk:German torpedo boat T13/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:10, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Modifications

"T13 had this mount replacing the single mount in the superfiring position in May–July during a refit." - Add installed between mount and replacing, if that is correct

Infobox

You state that the completion date was 31 May 1941; the text says "and commissioned on 31 May 1941". A commissioning date isn't necessarily the completion date, see the French ironclad Provence article I just reviewed where the two are different. So essentially, the completion date in the infobox is uncited, and the commissioning date should be added to the infobox.

Construction and career

"and her sisters T14, T18, T19 and T21" - Link to T18, T19, and T21 here.
- Good catch
"Screened by the 2nd and 3rd Torpedo Boat Flotillas (T13, T5, T9, T12, T16, T19 and T21)" - In all the other points, you list the ships in numerical order. Is the variance here intentional? I can't tell if this is an oversight or an intentional putting of T13 first, since she's the article subject
- For those units which T13 is in, she's the first one listed. If she's not, they're alphabetical.
" Royal Air Force Handley Page Halifax heavy bombers" - MOS:SEAOFBLUE, three links in a row.

Referencing and images look acceptable. Another tidy little article in the series, not a whole lot to pick at here. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 03:47, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

- All done. Gotta say I'm enjoying the number of reviews that you're doing. Works nicely for my 30 for 30 project this month.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:38, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Yeah, I'm back at university now, so I don't have all of my books with me for space considerations, so I'm reviewing more than content writing as a result. Hog Farm _Bacon 16:01, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]