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A few comments:

  • All or none in the lede.
I added a few more citations in the lead if that's what you mean. If not, can you be a bit more specific?--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, that is what I meant. Sorry I was unclear.
  • You might try rearranging the two pictures that are next to one another in the first few patrol sections. If you can't find better placement, it's not a big deal.
I've spread the images around in the article.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It looks much better now.
  • A reference and some explanation on the solitary note would be nice.
I've removed the ship from the list of ships hit by U-47. There is no evidence that the two vessles even met each other.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Alright.
  • "...all of whom are presumed dead." "Were" presumed dead might make a bit more sense in this context.
Done.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Okay.
  • Can you add anything more to the infobox?
I;ve expanded the infobox a bit. If there still needs to be more changes to it, just ask.--White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good. Another GA.

Those are all see from a my first read through. Reviewer: Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 20:06, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]