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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk · contribs) 10:44, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  • The first use of Korvettenkapitan in the lead, is an English equivalent required?
    • Moved the translation to the lede.
  • The stern was also modified at the time the bow was changed. HRS volume 3 p. 202
    • None of my sources mention any modifications to the stern for any of this class.
      • you are right, my error, what was changed in addition to lengthening the bow. das Backdeck erhielt einen Sprung bis 0,7m Höhe.
  • Fleet parade on 22 August 1938, Miklós Horthy and Hitler were present. On 8 December 1938 in Kiel for the launching of Graf Zeppelin. HRS v3 p203

Let me know if you want to include this info. Everything else looks ready to go. MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:51, 16 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]