Talk:German destroyer Z29
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German destroyer Z29 has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 8, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:39, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
I'll take this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 16:39, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
- See my comment on the photo at the Z28 review. Parsecboy (talk) 16:47, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
- "and reduced its speed to" - this should probably be "her" per WP:SHE4SHIPS
- This one's a little tricky since I'm really referring to the class in this sentence. Maybe "their"?
- That should work, I'd think. Parsecboy (talk) 16:15, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
- This one's a little tricky since I'm really referring to the class in this sentence. Maybe "their"?
- I might split off the last 3 paras as a "Later actions" or something. I'd probably also split the Barents Sea paragraph, as that's fairly long.
- Good idea.
Parsecboy (talk) 15:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:46, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
- Article looks to be good to go, nice work as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 13:17, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
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