Talk:German destroyer Z23/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:19, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:19, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No Dead links
Prose Suggestions
[edit]- the threat from Allied aircraft and cruisers attempting to prevent Axis blockade runners from reaching port through the bay. suggest you change this to which were threatened by Allied aircraft and cruisers attempting to prevent Axis blockade runners from reaching port through the bay.
- Heavy seas flooded her forecastle and she lost four men overboard before returning to Bordeaux. suggest During this mission, heavy seas flooded her forecastle and she lost four men overboard before returning to Bordeaux.
- @Sturmvogel 66: That is all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:54, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
- Good ideas both. Thanks for the quick reviews.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:28, 9 March 2018 (UTC)