Talk:German Mission House/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 05:59, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:22, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at this one over the upcoming weekend. Zawed (talk) 10:22, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments as follows:

Infobox

Is it possible to alter the scale of the map to show the whole island? Given the obscurity of the Chathams, the present scale, without any other features for reference/context, doesn't seem helpful.

History

Maunganui Bluff is red linked here but not in lead
following a land feud...: this wording seems strange, "a feud over land" seems a more natural expression. Also, who was he feuding with?
There are two different redlinks for Johannes Engst (text/caption), I would go with the one that doesn't use his middle name, doesn't need this level of disambiguation at this stage.

Structure

Dangerfield says that there were three bedrooms in the upper storey. May as mention the number as not explicitly stated at the moment.
The building is split into three rooms: strictly speaking, isn't it the ground floor that is split into three rooms?
1st column, 2 para of page 16 of Dangerfield touches on the importance attached to the building by the locals. Worth mentioning?

Source checks

Other stuff

No dupe links
The colour image tags check out although the two B&W photographs need US tags.
I noticed it was only placed in one category, I added a couple more that I thought were relevant.

@Zawed: Thank you so much! I think I fixed everything up. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:40, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Looks all fine to me. Passing as GA as I believe that this meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:13, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]