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 Quill and Pen (talk) 22:16, 17 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since I have been warned not too edit this article this is what was removed by a contributor

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The following shows what was removed from this article by an editor: [[1]] and as you can see I did NOT remove referenced material. I did remove extraneous verbiage that was not needed. I don't think anyone particularly cares, or finds all that important, about whether Page did not show up for a performance. What is important is that she died and people were notified. Funeral attendance is important too as it shows how people within in her profession viewed her work. And for word smithing: A better choice of words would be died from a heart attack NOT died of a heart attack as written. The word from indicates a cause as in "The child suffers from asthma or she died from a heart attack." The word of expresses a relationship but not a cause as the word from does. Quill and Pen (talk) 15:55, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you want to remove sourced, relevant material, form a consensus before doing so. That is WP policy. Your own opinion about what people particularly care about is not relevant. Grandpallama (talk) 17:05, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
What I did remove was extraneous words that added nothing to the article. As to relevancy: What is relevant to one person may not be to another...in this case you seem to dispute the relevancy and I don't agree with you. That's it in a nutshell. Quill and Pen (talk) 18:22, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Clean Up

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I changed a sentence from Page did to Page performed. She performed in a series not did a series. I also broke down a long-winded, poorly written sentence. Once I made sense of the sentence I realized Page had received two Emmys for two different shows. The sentences now reflect this. Quill and Pen (talk) 04:21, 13 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In doing so, you have misidentified the names of the awards. I have fixed this and provided citations, while still attempting to keep the sentences from becoming overly awkward. Grandpallama (talk) 16:02, 13 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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GA Review

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Reviewer: Auldhouse (talk · contribs) 22:23, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be glad to review this article. Auldhouse (talk) 22:23, 11 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    I ran the article through Grammarly which picked up few minor copy edit and phrasing issues which I fixed. Auldhouse (talk) 17:58, 13 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

Good use of references and no issues. I fixed one dead link with an archive URL.

  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  4. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    This is a great article--I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Page was one classy actress. Auldhouse (talk) 18:19, 13 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Joe McCarthy

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He had nothing to "Hollywood Blacklist", he investigated the State Dept. 2603:6000:D700:194D:1892:2DD:C5C9:5691 (talk) 12:59, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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