Talk:Gerald Francis Clifford/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Let the review begin. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

We was an active trial lawyer <<=== He
I don't think Prohibition should be capitalized since it isn't referring to the era.
well known ===>>> well-known
He is a member of The Hungry Five ===>>> He is one of The Hungry Five (I don't think "member" is correct since it's not a "real" group.)

Early life

although he grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. ===>>> but grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan.

Legal and political career

Attorney General of Wisconsin <<<=== I don't think "attorney general" should be capitalized
Same thing with capitalizing Prohibition.
Is the "national Democratic party convention" the same as the "Democratic National Convention"?

Green Bay Packers

His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became part of The Hungry Five ===>>> His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became recognized as one of The Hungry Five
Link receivership
He then helped draft and signed the Articles of Incorporation ===>>> He then helped draft and sign the Articles of Incorporation

Personal life

Good.

Overall

All of the links work.
Well-cited.
No dab links.
No plagiarism detected.

Looks good. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:44, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for another review Sportsfan77777! I made all the changes except the capitalization of Prohibition and Attorney General. For attorney general, when it is used as a formal title and position that was held, it should be capitalized (see Josh Kaul and List of Attorneys General of Wisconsin), whereas when it is used as a general term is it lowercase. For Prohibition, the link is to Prohibition in the United States. Since it is referencing a specific era and US government policy (and not just the word prohibition), it should capitalized. Let me know what you think. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:50, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Passing, good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:37, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]