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Reviewer: Caponer (talk · contribs) 17:07, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AgnosticPreachersKid, I will complete a thorough and comprehensive review of this article within the next 48 hours. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns in the meantime! Thanks! -- Caponer (talk) 17:07, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Caponer, thanks once again for the review! APK whisper in my ear 18:42, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

AgnosticPreachersKid, I've completed my comprehensive and thorough review of your article and I find that it meets Good Article criteria. Prior to its passage to GA status, I do have a few comments and suggestions that must first be addressed. Thank you for all your hard work and for your efforts on this article. -- Caponer (talk) 17:18, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lede

  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, the lede of this article adequately defines the memorial, establishes the necessary context for the memorial, and explains why the memorial is notable.
  • The template is beautifully formatted, its contents are cited within the prose and by the references below, and its image is licensed CC BY-SA 3.0 and therefore eligible for inclusion in this article.
  • The lede is well-written, consists of content that is adequately sourced and verifiable, and I have no other comments or questions for this section.

History

  • In the first paragraph of the Background subsection, the sentence should begin "He succeeded in defeating..."
  • The image of George Gordon Meade, photographed by Mathew Brady, is released into the public domain and is therefore eligible for usage in this article.
  • The final sentence of the second paragraph of the Background subsection requires a period. Or were these paragraphs unintentionally separated?
  • The image of the dedication of the memorial in 1927 is released into the public domain and is free to use here.
  • The last sentence of the first paragraph of the Dedication subsection requires a period.
  • Otherwise, this section is well-written, consists of content that is adequately sourced and verifiable, and I have no other comments or questions for this section.

Design and location

  • The image of the sculpture is licensed CC0 and is therefore free to use in this article.
  • This section is well-written, consists of content that is adequately sourced and verifiable, and I have no comments or questions for this section.

 Done APK whisper in my ear 18:45, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AgnosticPreachersKid, following my review and re-review of your article, I find that it is good to go for passage to Good Article status. Thank you for all your tremendous work on yet another Good Article! -- Caponer (talk) 19:05, 22 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]