Talk:George F. Lewis/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:11, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
Doing this for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:11, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
[edit]- The image caption needs to be expanded from just "1863"
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- The lead is on the short side. Consider expanding it with relevant summarized information from the article body
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Early life and education
[edit]- Do we have any information about his parents and what they did?
- Done -Looked everywhere and nothing mentioned about his parents other than they moved to Mount Clemens.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- Also I cannot see any information about his education despite the section includes the word "education".
- Done - removed education. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Business career
[edit]- Wikilink Lake Superior on the first mention
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "On his return trip to New York City that fall," - avoid the use of seasons per MOS:SEASON
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "to get copper ore samples." - to obtain samples of copper ore.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "he met Horace Greeley of the New-York Tribune." - what was the meeting about?
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "when took a job in July " - when he took
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "winter of 1848–1849." - 1848 to 1849.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Lewis started the Port Huron Commercial newspaper in 1851[1]" - a comma is missing between "1851" and the citation
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "and then sold it to the Saginaw Enterprise Publishing Company." - and he subsequently
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]- The final two paragraphs should be merged together to avoid having stubby one-line paragraphs
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Lewis died May 30, 1890." - died on May 30
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- Also, please date where Lewis died and what he died from (if the information is available)
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:49, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
- @Doug Coldwell: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:07, 6 October 2020 (UTC)