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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:23, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to take this :) Posting my comments in a week, Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 08:23, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • No copyvio and dablink issues
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:35, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • One duplink - Columbia University (Later life)
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:35, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sourcing and citations
  • The first para of Later life lacks inline citations
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:39, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 5 has a dead URL
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:39, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is there an asterisk before the Onion ref?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:39, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Avoid all caps
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:39, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Prose and coverage
  • Can we add the year for the infobox image and also the time capsule one?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:56, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link time capsule in the infobox and on first mention in the main text
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:00, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Shouldn't children be included in the infobox?
 Done - All libraries are closed now. That would be in a Who Was Who in America (or the like) and is not online (I researched it). Need actual hard copy book, which I have no access to at the moment. Can add later, when I am able to get books again. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:58, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I meant the three daughters already mentioned in the main text. Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 16:02, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:08, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • He remained at the Tribune Italicize Tribune
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:01, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • he applied that interest as a science editor I think "he worked as a science editor" implies the same thing in short.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:08, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't think laundromat should be in italics, use quotes
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:08, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any links for "liquid propulsion rockets"?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:13, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Introduce Robert H. Goddard in the main text
{{Done}] --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:37, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • whose papers he later edited with Goddard's widow Was she also a notable scientific personality? Then we may include her here
 Done - removed Goddard's widow. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:37, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • [which was renamed the American Rocket Society (ARS)] Why square brackets?
 Done - fixed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:37, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I feel American Interplanetary Society deserves a mention in the lead, especially due to the award in his honor.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:43, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link National Aeronautics and Space Administration in the main text
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:43, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any background for Annice D. Crema?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 17:19, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That should be it. A very interesting read :) Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 02:37, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: - All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 17:19, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All the issues above are done with, just one more point that I forgot to list. Are the refs 1 and 2 the sources for all the bullets in Positions, and ref 8 is the source for all the works? And there should be some citations to support all the points in Education. Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 18:00, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: -- Yes, ref 1 and 2 cover the bullets in Positions. Ref 8 covers the works. Ref 1 covers Education. Will that work? --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:14, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, looks much better. Promoted :) Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 03:05, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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