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I have just completed the B class checklist for military history project and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following issues:
Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the subject's life in more detail, e.g. early and later life. It could also discuss some of the significant actions that the subject was involved in.
Structure: the article's structure could be improved by creating a number of different sections, including perhaps: Introduction, Early life, Military Career, Later life.
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Just some ideas. If you want some more specific comments, you might consider submitting it to WP:MHPR for peer review. Also, when or if the article is expanded, you might like to have it re-assessed for the military history project. This can be achieved by adding it to the list of articles for assessment on WP:MHA. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 09:44, 12 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
