Talk:General Dynamics F-16 Fighting Falcon/GA1

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Reviewer: FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 00:23, 21 March 2011 (UTC) Ooo... can't pass up the opportunity to review an article on my favorite plane... (other than the F-22 Raptor).

Comments

• LOL to the above...
• If the YF-16 gets flight hours, so should the YF-17. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 00:35, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
  • This does not seem too critical since that is not really relevant to the YF-16. I don't have the Richardson reference to check, but I used another reference to cover that. [Updated] -Fnlayson (talk) 21:32, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
• The Sept. 13 IAF accident doesn't need so much detail about Ilaf Ramon, but the entire accidents section could use some more detail, or else could be made into a branch-off article.
• Once, I noticed that you said 20 [unit name here] instead of 20th [unit name here]. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 21:01, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

• The pilot being related to someone is the main thing that makes that entry notable. Most crashes of fighter aircraft have little or no lasting notability. I'll try to trim back the text where possible. -Fnlayson (talk) 15:58, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

All right. Passed. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:14, 7 April 2011 (UTC)