Talk:Geet Ramayan/GA1
Appearance
GA Review
[edit]GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
- Marathi language is overlinked.
- Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.
- It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".
- Yeah. I hadnt removed that intentionally. Anyway, removed now.
- It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".
- Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.
- the television --> television
- Done
- with songs composed by --> and the songs being composed by
- Done
- lyrics and music, including singing --> lyrics, music and singing
- Done
- References should be after punctuation marks.
- I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?
- Check the first para of the lead.
- Done
- Check the first para of the lead.
- I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?
- most popular should be quoted.
- Done
- You have already mentioned that Phadke was the composer
- Done
- aired --> being aired
- Done
chose should be in past tenseSorry, you have used the correct word.
- Can you explain this a bit? I didnt get you here.
- called --> was called
- Done
- Ādhunik Valmiki should be italicised
- Done
- No need to overlink IST
- Done. Removed it from the lead
- The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.
- Done
- The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.
- Done. Removed it from the lead
- angered Madgulkar readily declined --> which was readily declined by an angered Madgulkar
- Done
- The names of the songs should be italicised
- Not per WP:MOS
- who included --> which included
- Done
- The second para of "Music and singing" section has no references.
- Done
- Describe Nishadraj and the boatmen
- Done
- "He was shown to be distracted at the loss Sita ... confessions of loyalty to Sita (in "Lokasākṣa Shuddhī Jhālī")." - Reference needed.
- Done Though songs can be used as a reference for itself.
- The lead should have some content of the "Characters" section.
- Done
- The last source in the ref section needs fields like publisher and other if possible.
- Done
Once these issues are fixed I will pass this article. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
- I have fixed
someall of your concerns. Thanks for your review. - Vivvt • (Talk) 03:17, 28 March 2013 (UTC)- Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 03:24, 28 March 2013 (UTC)