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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Removed it from infobox. The template lang-mr has that included in itself.
It is also linked in "collection of 56 Marathi language songs".
Yeah. I hadnt removed that intentionally. Anyway, removed now.
  • the television --> television
Done
  • with songs composed by --> and the songs being composed by
Done
  • lyrics and music, including singing --> lyrics, music and singing
Done
  • References should be after punctuation marks.
I don't see like this in the article anywhere. Can you please let me know where I have done that mistake?
Check the first para of the lead.
Done
  • most popular should be quoted.
Done
  • You have already mentioned that Phadke was the composer
Done
  • aired --> being aired
Done
  • chose should be in past tense Sorry, you have used the correct word.
Can you explain this a bit? I didnt get you here.
  • called --> was called
Done
  • Ādhunik Valmiki should be italicised
Done
  • No need to overlink IST
Done. Removed it from the lead
The lead one should be linked, an the others should be ddelinked.
Done
  • angered Madgulkar readily declined --> which was readily declined by an angered Madgulkar
Done
  • The names of the songs should be italicised
Not per WP:MOS
  • who included --> which included
Done
  • The second para of "Music and singing" section has no references.
Done
  • Describe Nishadraj and the boatmen
Done
  • "He was shown to be distracted at the loss Sita ... confessions of loyalty to Sita (in "Lokasākṣa Shuddhī Jhālī")." - Reference needed.
Done Though songs can be used as a reference for itself.
  • The lead should have some content of the "Characters" section.
Done
  • The last source in the ref section needs fields like publisher and other if possible.
Done

Once these issues are fixed I will pass this article. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:44, 27 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have fixed some all of your concerns. Thanks for your review. - Vivvt • (Talk) 03:17, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 03:24, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]