Talk:Ge rum i Bröllopsgåln din hund!

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

You do have a good amount of GANs up; here's another review from me! --K. Peake 08:27, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you very much! Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:59, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Lead

• What exactly makes the img relevant here?
  • Contemporary image of just such a scene in Bellman's Stockholm.
• Remove comma after the brackets
  • Done.
• Like last time, the best-known and best-loved songs info should not be in the opening sentence; instead, mention that it is Epistle No. 40 them from his 1790 collection
  • Done.
• Add a sentence mentioning the pattern of the verses here
  • Done.
• "with soldiers mixed up" → "where soldiers mixed up"
  • Done.
• The subtitle is not sourced anywhere in the body
  • Added.
• Remove musicologist introduction to James Massengale since this being in the body is sufficient
  • Done.
• Maybe add what writers actually praised about the song and if any of the covers are notable enough, mention them here
  • Added.

Context

• Pipe King Gustav III to Gustav III on the img text
  • Done.
• [1] should be solely at the end of the sentence
  • Moved.
• "from drinking songs to" → "such as drinking songs and"
  • Done.
• "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
  • Done.

Song

Music and verse form

• Like last time, add text for the audio sample to comply with WP:NFCCP
  • Done.
• "each of 14 lines." → "each consisting of 14 lines."
  • Done.
• Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
  • Done.
• Img looks good!
  • Thanks!

Lyrics

• "the soldiers; the chimney" → "the soldiers. Meanwhile, the chimney" to avoid an overly long sentence, as the voiced parts can be separate from the rest anyway
  • Split.
• Start box looks good!
  • Noted.

Reception

• Pipe musicologist to Musicology
  • Done.
• "and divisions of the music" → "and divisions of it"
  • Edited.
• "he interjects short" → "Bellman interjects short"
  • Done.
• "at the start and" → "at the start," since this is not the end
  • Done.
• Is the comma supposed to be inside speech marks for "Skyldra"?
  • Yes.

• Thanks for clarifying! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

• The word "very" is not needed before beginning
  • Gone.
• Pipe syntactic to Syntax
  • Done.
• Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana on the img text
  • Done.
• "furioso"[11] in which it's" → "furioso",[11] in which it is"
  • Done.
• Start a new sentence at "What Fredman himself"
  • Done.
• "The critic Bo Nordstrand notes" → "Critic Bo Nordstrand notes"
  • No, that's way too American.
• Pipe Wedding at Cana to Marriage at Cana
  • Done.
• Start a new sentence at "Like his contemporaries,"
  • Done.
• "and that quote the Bible" → "and draw quotes from the Bible"
  • Edited.
• Pipe book of Psalms to Psalms
  • Done.
• "society chapter rituals and" → "society chapter rituals, and"
  • Done.
• "The Bellman Society describes it as" → "The Bellman Society wrote of the composition," with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Done.

Performances and adaptions

• The covers need more information than just appearing on albums to remain per WP:SONGCOVER
  • Removed for now.
• If the covers end up lacking notability, then merge the translation with the above section and retitle to Reception and legacy
  • Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks very good at 26.5%!!!
  • Thank goodness.
• Refs 2 and 8 are duplicates; is this a mistake or are they supposed to be citing separate pages?
  • Merged.
• The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 3 with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Done.
• Add language parameter for refs 10, 12 and 15
  • Done.
• The Bellman Society → Bellman Society on ref 13 and add the language parameter
  • Done.

Sources

• Good
  • Noted.

External links

• After the titles of links, add at followed by the website
  • Done.
• Remove the first YouTube link since it is a copyright violation
  • Gone.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; another relatively quick review! --K. Peake 11:56, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I think that's everything done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:45, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, smooth job once again! --K. Peake 09:23, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 14:47, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

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"A noisy company" in Bellman's Stockholm

• ... that Bellman's song describes "one of the wildest weddings in Swedish literature"? Source: ISBN 978-91-0-057245-7. OCLC 61881374.
  Massengale, James Rhea (1979). The Musical-Poetic Method of Carl Michael Bellman. Stockholm: Almqvist & Wiksell International. ISBN 91-554-0849-4. pages 112-116

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Plecia canadensis
• Comment: GA today.

Created by Chiswick Chap (talk). Self-nominated at 17:15, 25 November 2021 (UTC).

• Article was nominated on same day as promotion to good article. No copyvios detected (AGF all refs re. any close paraphrasing issues, since none can go through Dup detector; high confidence of violation due to lyrics that have been cited). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 82 characters long (under 200 character max.) and is interesting. Ref 1 (verifying the hook) is a reliable source (AGF offline ref). QPQ done. Image is free and in the public domain. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 22:06, 25 November 2021 (UTC)