Talk:Gate (Sore wa Akatsuki no You ni)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Capitalize the 'y' in the song's infobox title please
- "Format" parameter: "Digital Download" --> "Digital download"
- You could probably link "Kisida in the "Writer" parameter to the group page for "Kisida Kyoudan & The Akebosi Rockets"
- You need to space "(2013)" evenly after the song "Strike the Blood"
Lead
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[edit]- Capitalize the 'y' in the song's bolded title please
- "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."
Background and release
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[edit]- "It was released as the groups first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015." --> "It was released as the group's first single in two years by Warner Bros. Entertainment and their subsidiary label Warner Home Video on July 29, 2015."
- Just a suggestion: "Each format (apart from the digital release) includes three different artworks, all promotional images taken from the television series.[A] --> "Each format, apart from the digital release, includes three different artworks with all promotional images taken from the television series.[A]"
Reception
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[edit]- You can link "music critics" here to its respective article for "Music journalism"
- "The review concluded with the reviewer labelling it "exhilarating".[3]" --> "The review concluded with the reviewer labeling it "exhilarating".[3]"
- Please italicize "The Outerhaven"
Paragraph 2
[edit]- "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the groups lowest entry at the time.[12]" --> "It debuted at number 17 on the Oricon Singles Chart, the group's lowest entry at the time.[12]"
- Please italicize "Billboard"
Music video and promotion
[edit]- Absolutely great work! Fantastic :)
End of GA Review:
[edit]Great work as always! On hold for seven days to address the issues I brought up in the above review. Thanks so much! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:38, 28 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:12, 29 June 2016 (UTC)