Talk:Gasteracantha fornicata

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I edited your article for some minor grammatical errors and changed some wording to make your sentences more clear. I also added an additional picture in the "webs" section. The article didn't have many embedded links so I added more of those as well. Overall, the article has really good information and is well-written. I only had to make some minor edits relating to grammar and structure. Nickh994 (talk) 07:57, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 September 2020 and 17 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Akwan826. Peer reviewers: Saachijain, Nickh994, Shutaro.hayashihara.

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Edits

This Wikipedia entry is very well-researched and well-written. It has really informative sections and subsections. The text is fully referenced. I like the Predatory feeding section since. I only made minor edits for grammar.

Student Edits

I think that you have a really strong Wikipedia article that is well structured and written. One thing that I changed was the header, “enemies.” I thought that wording was not right for a Wikipedia page and the actual content was about predators and how the spider protects itself so I made it “predation and protection.” I also made one of your headers “mating behavior” instead of “mating.” Hopefully as the semester progresses, more information can be added under this header. One suggestion that I have for this article is added more behavior-related information. The description section is very solid but in terms of behavior, only mating behavior is really mentioned so adding that would make the article even better.

Shutaro.hayashihara (talk