Talk:Gas/Archive-1

New Lead Section

JamAKiska (talk) 19:16, 9 October 2009 (UTC) This section expands from previous material by distinguishing a gas from other states of matter and expands upon the various types of gases.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:39, 9 October 2009 (UTC) wikified physical properties.

clarifying characteristics section JamAKiska (talk) 02:39, 11 October 2009 (UTC) tweaks.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:26, 11 October 2009 (UTC)Inserted Purplesmoke image into characteristics, and tweaked introduction for readability

JamAKiska (talk) 04:11, 12 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks on macroscopic for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:48, 12 October 2009 (UTC)/* Macroscopic */ Expanding this discussion to improve link to historical, math, and the rest of this article.

JamAKiska (talk) 19:51, 12 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:05, 12 October 2009 (UTC) /* Pressure */ clarifying passage. My intent is to relocate the last portion into the Kinetic theory section.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:35, 12 October 2009 (UTC)Relocating material where more appropriate. Tweaks to temperature.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:47, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Minor tweaks for clarity on Temperature.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:52, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Looking ahead to the volume section, looks like my definitions do not agree with the current material. Anticipate a rewrite of this section. JamAKiska (talk) 11:40, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Reread after a good nights sleep and this section is correct.

JamAKiska (talk) 03:38, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Microscopic */ Expanding section to provide crosslinks to other sections.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:31, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Specific Volume / Volume */ tweaked for clarity and introduced compressibility.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:23, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Clarifying macroscopic sections and adding symbology.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:37, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ tweak.

JamAKiska (talk) 19:17, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Microscopic */ Clarifying this section and Kinetic Theory for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:50, 13 October 2009 (UTC) /* Kinetic theory */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:40, 14 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Expanding coverage to include the significance these forces play.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:56, 14 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ The role they play in the transition from Perfect to Ideal to Real gases.

JamAKiska (talk) 04:19, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ tweak.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:43, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /*Macro*/ Adding imagery and supporting language in the closing paragraph of this section to expand connections.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:48, 15 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:57, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Tweaks for clarity regarding compressibility effects.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:47, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Restructuring to ease transition into more challenging material.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:58, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ Extending coverage from ideal to real gases. Reorganized Historical section to include Avogadro's law.

JamAKiska (talk) 23:03, 15 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ editing footnote.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:33, 16 October 2009 (UTC) /* Historical Synthesis */ Added background for depth.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:56, 16 October 2009 (UTC) / * Simplified Models */ Tweak citations for standardization.

JamAKiska (talk) 18:08, 16 October 2009 (UTC) /* Law of Volumes */Grammar Tweaks.

JamAKiska (talk) 04:34, 17 October 2009 (UTC) Supplementing article with models and images to illustrate key points.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:17, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Aligning captions with article.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:32, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Citing sources and aligning text with article.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:50, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Citing sources and aligning text with article.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:40, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Real gas */ Realigning text to introduce image.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:45, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Realigning text to introduce image.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:51, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Pressure */ Realigning text to introduce image.

JamAKiska (talk) 16:59, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Historical Synthesis */ Realigning text to introduce image.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:09, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Special Topics */ Citing image sources.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:15, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Image tweaks.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:18, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Specific Volume / Volume */ Linking image to article.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:36, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Word tweak for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:47, 17 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Adjusting text for clarification and consistency.

JamAKiska (talk) 03:58, 18 October 2009 (UTC) /* Special Topics */ swapping photos for better view of boundary layer.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:39, 18 October 2009 (UTC) /* Viscosity */ Improving clarity of this passage.

JamAKiska (talk) 18:00, 18 October 2009 (UTC) /* Special Topics */ Linking turbulent images to text.

JamAKiska (talk) 18:43, 18 October 2009 (UTC) /* Thermodynamic Equilibrium */ Adding clarity to the discussion.

JamAKiska (talk) 18:53, 18 October 2009 (UTC) /* Viscosity */ Tweaks.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:39, 19 October 2009 (UTC) Wikifying and editing article.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:38, 19 October 2009 (UTC) /* Compressibility */ tweaks for clarification.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:52, 19 October 2009 (UTC) /* Compressibility */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:23, 19 October 2009 (UTC) /* Reynolds Number */ Tweaks for clarification.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:28, 19 October 2009 (UTC) /* Viscosity */ Minor Tweaks.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:05, 20 October 2009 (UTC) Revised article image captions to conform to standard.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:08, 20 October 2009 (UTC) Adding reference material throughout article.

JamAKiska (talk) 18:55, 20 October 2009 (UTC) Adding references to support article.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:04, 21 October 2009 (UTC) Cleaning up appearance of article.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:16, 21 October 2009 (UTC) Spacing adjustments to tidy up presentation.

JamAKiska (talk) 04:44, 22 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Tweaking the details to align with texts (John's GD 1984). More to follow.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:31, 22 October 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Citing references and clarifying material.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:36, 22 October 2009 (UTC) Editing citation in Real gas section.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:37, 22 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks to citations.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:32, 22 October 2009 (UTC) Formatting Article and tweaking citations.

JamAKiska (talk) 23:34, 22 October 2009 (UTC) Editing caption citation to conform to standard.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:56, 23 October 2009 (UTC) Editing for clarity and providing links to related topics.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:03, 23 October 2009 (UTC) Alignment.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:19, 23 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks to Models section for clarification.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:37, 23 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks to models.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:51, 23 October 2009 (UTC) More topics added to this section.

JamAKiska (talk) 02:02, 27 October 2009 (UTC) /* simplified models */ Clarifying terms in expressions.

JamAKiska (talk) 11:30, 27 October 2009 (UTC) Minor edits in simplified models section for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 11:40, 27 October 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for clarification.

JamAKiska (talk) 19:57, 27 October 2009 (UTC) * Kinetic theory */ Wikifying this section.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:02, 27 October 2009 (UTC) /* Special topics */ Refocusing effort.

JamAKiska (talk) 04:01, 28 October 2009 (UTC) * See also */ More topics added.

JamAKiska (talk) 01:19, 29 October 2009 (UTC) * See also */ More topics added.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:38, 29 October 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Adding citations that illuminate the boundaries for the reader.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:42, 29 October 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ Adding other extensions.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:43, 29 October 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ Formatting see also section.

JamAKiska (talk) 03:23, 30 October 2009 (UTC) Formatting see also section.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:15, 30 October 2009 (UTC) /* Microscopic */ Inserted image and supporting link in material to illustrate Brownian motion.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:24, 30 October 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ Adding other extensions.

JamAKiska (talk) 14:34, 30 October 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:37, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Tweak for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:44, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:47, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:50, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Ideal gas */ Grammer tweak.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:57, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:18, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 21:39, 1 November 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 02:45, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Pressure */ Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 02:58, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Temperature */ Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 11:56, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /*Macroscopic*/Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:16, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:29, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Macroscopic */ Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:38, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Density */ Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:46, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Intermolecular forces */ Tweaks for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:40, 2 November 2009 (UTC) /* Maximum entropy principle */ Expanding section for purposes of illustration.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:43, 3 November 2009 (UTC) Phrase for disambiguation.

JamAKiska (talk) 05:04, 4 November 2009 (UTC) Tweak for disambiguation.

JamAKiska (talk) 03:09, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Rewriting introduction to better describe the path to be taken.

JamAKiska (talk) 12:49, 5 November 2009 (UTC) /* Physical characteristics */ Clarifying section.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:01, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Prividing links to additional material on Bose-Einstein condensate.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:06, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Wikifying footnote.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:17, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:26, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Editing for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 13:45, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Editing for clarity.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:56, 5 November 2009 (UTC) Completed article introduction.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:21, 7 November 2009 (UTC) Tweaks for readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 14:53, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Revised introduction to establish stronger links to current research and improve readability.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:22, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Readability adjustment.

JamAKiska (talk) 22:47, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Adjusting footnotes.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:06, 14 November 2009 (UTC) Linking to optics.

JamAKiska (talk) 20:59, 16 November 2009 (UTC) /* Turbulence */ Adjusted caption to include optical connection of gases.

JamAKiska (talk) 15:41, 18 November 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ More topics added.

JamAKiska (talk) 17:06, 25 November 2009 (UTC) /* See also */ Adding gas extensions.

JamAKiska (talk) 02:57, 7 December 2009 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Adding current examples of applications.

JamAKiska (talk) 14:19, 7 December 2009 (UTC) /* Perfect gas */ Tweak for Clarification.

Added clarification that the article, as written, does not consider significant electric or gravitational effect. CUoD (talk) 13:50, 23 December 2009 (UTC)

Linking to current events in aviation. CUoD (talk) 20:13, 23 December 2009 (UTC)

/* Macroscopic */ Adjusting article for removal of carrier landing photo and relocation of other photos to the right. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 16:42, 5 January 2010 (UTC)

/* Brownian motion */ Tweaking text to align with de-animated files. CUoD (talk) 17:06, 5 January 2010 (UTC) /* Real gas */ Realigning text in article to new photo locations. CUoD (talk) 17:12, 5 January 2010 (UTC) /* Turbulence et al */ Realigning text in article to new photo locations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 17:17, 5 January 2010 (UTC) /* Temperature */ Introducing movie of balloon under influence of liquid nitrogen. CUoD (talk) 17:31, 5 January 2010 (UTC) /* Simplified models */ Introducing relocated Wright Flyer photo. CUoD (talk) 17:37, 5 January 2010 (UTC) Reintroduced all images in article to eliminate spatial references, as not all viewers get same formatting for images on their screens. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamAKiska (talk • contribs) 15:04, 13 February 2010 (UTC)