Talk:Garden City High School (Kansas)/GA1
GA Review
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Good Article Review June 10 2009
[edit]I have just reviewed this article for status of GA. Here is my review and suggestions for further improvement:
1. Is it well written? In this respect, it:
- It's a little listy in places, but this is a pass.
- I have gone throughout the article and made a few grammar and prose changes that I felt made the article flow more smoothly. I believe that other editors should also repeat this as there were several typos and basic lapses in grammar that I corrected. I might have missed some.
- I have some issues with the section headings. For example, wouldn't state championships and fall, spring and winter sports fall under athletics?
- I think some formatting issues could be corrected and a bit more time spent on correcting grammar and prose and making the article easy to read.
2. Is factually accurate and verifiable? In this respect, it:
- Pass
- The majority of facts are correct and well-cited.
- Reference 1 is used 15 times throughout the article, maybe look for secondary sources
3. Is it broad in its coverage? In this respect, it:
- Pass
- The article seems to be fairly broad in its coverage, ranging from initial discussion of construction up to the new grants they have received.
4. Does the article maintain Neutrality?
- Pass
- Mostly, in some places it does list.
5. Is it stable?
- Pass
- The article seems to be stable
6. Is it illustrated, where possible and appropriate, by images.? In this respect:
- Pass
- The article is well illustrated and I think the fair use claims are vaild.
- The photo of the 2007 Golf Team is unneeded.
Conclusion
[edit]In conclusion, the article as it stands I think it is very good and I do think that the article needs some more work to make it great, but there is nothing significant that would make me fail it. As so I have granted GA status.