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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:42, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- Add "recorded" in between "song" and "by"
- Shouldn't it be "singer and songwriter"?
- I don't think you have to include "Although not released as a single"
- American English: "criticised" → "criticized"
- "While working on her then-upcoming album" → You should probably include the name of the album since it isn't mentioned at all except in the lead
- I don't think "hits" is really encyclopedic
- "Among the songs recorded for the album, "Gang Bang" was confirmed to be part of the track listing." → When was it confirmed? And source?
- Since Tarantino has done a good handful of films (with almost all of them being blockbuster films), you probably can remove Pulp Fiction altogether; this would sound better in a magazine
- "Shot you dead, shot my lover in the head... I'm going straight to hell... I've got a lot of friends there," --> Should the "..." be "/" instead?
- "MTV News's" --> "MTV News'"
- "X. Alender" → Says differently in the source
- "The song received positive critical feedback." --> This sounds redundant to me :/
- Already linked The Guardian
- "Although it was not released as a single, " --> Same as before
- I don't think you need to link "setlist"
- "Good Morning America" should be italicized
- "Dexter" should be italicized
- Great job as always. On hold to address these few and minor issues. Carbrera (talk) 03:31, 7 September 2016 (UTC).
- Dealing with this today. —IB [ Poke ] 10:24, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera:, all done. —IB [ Poke ] 09:50, 13 September 2016 (UTC)