Talk:Gagged (EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 07:16, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No dead links
No DAB links
File:GaggedCoverArt.png needs to be in 300×300 to comply with WP:NFCC#3b and would need a direct source from where you obtained the cover art.

Resized and added source for the cover art. Aoba47 (talk) 19:24, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

File:BettieNeedsASpank.ogg is of 166 kb/s bit rate. That's a high bit rate for a sample and to comply with WP:NFCC#2 please reduce the quality to 56 kb/s. Also there is issue with the description of the sample in the article page which says, ""Bettie" was described as a "glitchy dubstep banger with a booming bassline" by Gay News Network". This is what the reviewer from GNN says about the song, but it does not explain how the sample is explaining or aurally aiding the reader in understanding it. That's a potential wP:NFCC#8 failing.

Uploaded a reduced quality sample, and changed the subtitle to better explain how the sample is explaining or aurally aiding the reader in understanding it. Aoba47 (talk) 23:58, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Violet Chachki's Billboard page has all the charts listed which you can link to using {{album chart}} template. You don't need to hard code the Charts as you have done in the chart section.

I did some reference fixes and general fixes also with this edit using script. Please review it.

Thank you for the fixes! They all look good to me. Aoba47 (talk) 19:24, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review so far. I will address your comments later today if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:13, 6 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Just wanted to let you know that I have addressed your comments so far. Thank you again for your help. Aoba47 (talk) 15:34, 7 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aoba, will be doing the rest of the prose review today :) —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 05:30, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Electronic music is not the genre, it is the type of music. Electronic dance music should be the actual link. Correct it in the Background section also.

Before going into the first para, I see that you have used GossipGay.com as the source of an interview. What makes this website reliable? I did not see any editorial board, nor do they explain their journalism policy. I could not find any discussion at WP:RSN board. This source needs to be listed at RSN then and verified, else the content sourced by it cannot be considered reliable.

Thank you for bringing this up. I will post on the RSN to see if is appropriate or not for use on Wikipedia. Luckily, if it is not deemed reliable or appropriate, I am pretty sure that I can work around it, and replace with other sources to support the same information. Aoba47 (talk) 15:50, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just as an update, I wanted to let you know that I have posted the question about GossipGay.com on RSN. Thank you for directing me there as it is a very useful resource that I can use when creating and/or expanding articles in the future. I still have a lot to learn regarding references/citations. Aoba47 (talk) 16:55, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

She attributed the process of creating the extended play (EP) with helping her to become more "well rounded" --> I think this was more of "She attributed the process of creating the extended play (EP) with helping her become more "well rounded".

Added. I feel silly that I didn't even catch that these two things were musical genres lol Aoba47 (talk) 15:14, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I worked really hard on this section. Aoba47 (talk) 15:14, 8 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47:, rest of the article is perfect also. Its just that one source pending and once that is passed I will be glad to promote this. Chachki is one of my favorite winners of RDR, after Bianca, Sharon and Raja. Never cared for Bebe and Tyra Sanchez as winners lol. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 08:51, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Thank you! I will let you know when I hear more back from the RSN about the source. I agree that those are all awesome winners from the show. I don't know enough about Bebe to say either way, but I have never been a big fan of Tyra either lol. I may work on more Drag Race-related articles in the future, as I really enjoyed doing this one. Aoba47 (talk) 14:11, 9 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Just as an update, here is a link to the discussion that is currently ongoing on RSN. I believe that the source is appropriate for citing an interview. Aoba47 (talk) 21:18, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for linking to that discussion, I can gladly pass this as a GA now. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 05:41, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! And thank you for showing me RSN as it is a very helpful resource. Aoba47 (talk) 14:17, 12 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]