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Reviewer: Numbermaniac (talk · contribs) 02:01, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Wow, this is quite a long article! Looks good to start with, but the first thing I do notice is perhaps a bit of citation overkill in the second paragraph. -- numbermaniac (talk) 02:01, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I've made a number of changes to the wording in several places. Grammar has needed editing in some places.
- What is the purpose of the italics in "ASP loophole in the GPL", under History/Version 3? Is that intentional, or a mistake?
- I'm not 100% sure about the usage of parts such as "For more information, see <article>" since I don't see that much elsewhere on the wiki, but I'll leave those as they are for now.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- References 109, 149
and 163are dead links. Please check the Wayback Machine and other archiving websites to see if they can be found. I checked the Wayback Machine for link 109 and most of them seem to return a 404 Not Found.- If you can't find any, let me know. Since full citations were used instead of bare URLs, they are still considered verifiable.
- (163 is now fixed, thanks bot!)
- On the other hand, I think there's a bit of citation overkill going on in the first sentence of the second paragraph. Please fix that.
- I notice a citation needed tag in the Copyleft section, and I've also included one of my own in the Derivations section. Please provide citations for those statements.
- References 109, 149
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The article is quite large, however there is a lot covered in this article, especially considering all the legal issues around such a popular license.
- Under the section "Open-source criticism", a summary should be included of the "Labyrinth of Software Freedom" analysis if possible. Currently, the article doesn't say anything about what this analysis states.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- I do like the idea of the "Point of view" section, describing and extending the different points of view on the linking issue.
- Quite a lot of negative opinions are presented, but perhaps not as many positives. However, both sides of opinions are still shown, so this shouldn't be a problem.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Please fix the issues mentioned above (italics, citation issues, and the summary of that analysis). Overall, this is pretty good.
- Pass/Fail:
It's been two months and the issues haven't been address, or even acknowledged here. As such I'm closing this. Wizardman 15:34, 10 September 2017 (UTC)