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This article reads like a list of bullet points

This article lacks an real substance and is just a list of bullet points. I feel like it does not contribute any great knowledge to the world. As an example, it states Demura was expelled from Itosu-kai but does not attempt to expound on any known reasons for it. It does not cite background or life details and only very basic details about what dates he achieved certain belts and certifications.

Nicholas.alipaz (talk) 06:02, 31 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]