Talk:Full Disclosure (The West Wing)/GA1
GA Reassessment
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Prose isn't very good, but more importantly, full of speculation that would be WP:OR if it weren't cited to completely unreliable sources like The West Wing Episode Guide. This was promoted in '07, it's fallen below GA standards since then. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/she) 20:12, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
Sourcing
[edit]- The West Wing Episode Guide isn't a reliable source, but its used to support a significant amount of extra-plot interpretation
The timing of the episode, however, was fortuitous, in that it coincided with the much-publicised Drudge story about presidential candidate John Kerry's alleged affair with a journalist.
without sourcing to support the connection, this is WP:SYNTH
Prose
[edit]- In the final paragraph,
pointing out
violates MOS:NOTED - Curly quotes and apostrophes abound
- "clear" is used twice in quick succession in the second plot paragraph
Washington, D.C.
needs a geocomma(Pickens)
full name not mentioned in the body
Broadness
[edit]- Contains no mention of episode's reception
Overall
[edit]Pinging @Lampman and The Giant Puffin as GA nominator and reviewer. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 20:30, 6 April 2022 (UTC)