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Improving the article

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I made a start by adding a bit to the lead, - more would be better. I also moved the references into a list, removing those no longer available online. I made his website an external link. (It's hard to read anyway with black writing on dark blue.)

  • Some facts need references.Green tickY
  • There should be a list of notable works, and better references for those than his own website.Green tickY
  • There should be more awards, - de has some more, partly referenced.Green tickY
  • Some refs have more detail (Who's Who?)Green tickY
  • There should be more obits.Green tickY

Let's do it together, - I'll be back tomorrow. -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:37, 11 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]