Talk:French ironclad Jeanne d'Arc/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Skinny87 (talk) 15:00, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Footnote on ironcladvs vs corvettes would be good. Suggest adding this to all articles like this.
Agreed.

Should mention the beginning of the Franco-Prussian War in 1870-1871 in the Service section, as context for moving towards Prussian positions.
Done.

'In 1875 she rammed and sank the dispatch vessel Forfait' - I'm guessing it was accidental; if so, can this be added to the sentence?
Done.

Does Rear-Admiral Bonie have a full name that can be wikilinked?
If I only knew it.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Rockwell in citations but not Reference section
Rockwell and Ward are both complete cites only used once. I can move them down to refs and change them into short cites if you'd prefer.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:33, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure what the accepted practice is here. Perhaps best to put them in as short cites? At least it's all consistent that way.Skinny87 (talk) 16:10, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

An interesting article; needs a few details and then it can be passed as a GA. Skinny87 (talk) 15:00, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now, so I'll get promotin'... Skinny87 (talk) 19:19, 10 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]