Talk:French ironclad Gauloise/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 04:31, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this one. Comments to follow.

Infobox

There is a surplus bracket on the main armament.

Design and description

Ever so slight discrepancy in PS between description and infobox.
- PS is the abbreviation for metric horsepower
There is also a switch between terminology here: nominal horsepower and PS - not sure if that is deliberate?
- Two different things. Nominal was based on the bore and stroke of the engine, but PS was an actual measurement of power.
Ever so slight discrepancy in thickness of the conning tower sides between description and infobox.

Construction and service

Discrepancy in launch date between description and infobox
Is there a link for Northern Squadron? Would also apply to its mention in lead
- No link yet.
...many of the trained gunners aboard the squadron... suggest: "...many of the trained gunners aboard the squadron's ships..."
link Mediterranean Squadron
- Linked in the lede

Other stuff

Image tags check out OK. A suggestion though; swap the images. I think it is better to have the image of the actual ship in the infobox rather than her sister. But that may be a personal preference and it won't affect this review if you choose not to.
No dupe links
The dablinks/external links tools don't want to work for me but on a manual check, the external links in the references check out OK

That's all I found on my first run through. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:52, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:17, 20 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I see one suggestion not effected, but that is pretty minor and not enough to hold this up. Passing as GA as I believe it meets the GA criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:59, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]