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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:French ironclad Bouvines/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:09, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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1.

  • Is there a specific reason that the convention of having the subject of article in bold in the first sentence isn't done here?
    • 'Cause I'm an idiot?
  • "The crew of the Bouvines class numbered 18 officers and 318 ratings; service as a flagship added 5 more officers and 33 more ratings.[2]" - This suggests 336 and 374, the infobox states 333 and 371
    • Typo, fixed to 15 officers
  • "The Bouvines class had a full-length waterline armor belt of steel that tapered from the maximum thickness of 464 mm (18.3 in) amidships to 250 mm (9.8 in) at the ship's ends." - Infobox gives 434 for the top number.
  • "others, including Rear Admiral Chateauminois" - Is his full name known?
  • "briefly became the flagship of Rear Admiral Ménard" - Is full name known?
  • " was replaced by Rear Admiral Escande" - Ditto as above
    • I've been unable to find their first names. None of them are listed in my biographical dictionary of French admirals.

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  • Referencing looks good.

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  • Licensing looks good.

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Placing on hold, just a few things to tighten up.

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:35, 2 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]