Talk:French ironclad Belliqueuse/GA1
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 05:55, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
- I thought the lead was a bit bare, so I added in a few sentences of my own. Anyways, it is a short article, so it's understandable.
- The article is well-written; I did very little copyediting (I think I added two commas).
- The referencing looks good.
- What is the Evolutionary Squad? Perhaps that merits a sentence of explanation (or maybe something in parenthesis or within em dashes).
- Everything else checks out.