Talk:French destroyer Le Hardi/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 07:39, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
I will do this one. Zawed (talk) 07:39, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
- In the lead: "July Attack on Mers-el-Kébir": suggest rephrasing to "July attack on Mers-el-Kébir". I can't see this mentioned in the body?
- Perhaps add commissioning date to infobox
- "Le Hardi was built by A C de la Loire": recite the shipbuilders' name in full for consistency with infobox?
- "550-millimeter (21.7 in) torpedo tubes,"; should the dimensions of the tubes be presented in the same style as for the guns? i.e. millmeter vs mm?
- Image tags check out OK
- External link OK
- No dabs, no dupe links
Will check back in a few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:01, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
- All done. Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:16, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
- Looks fine, passing as a good article, I consider this meets the GA criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 22:27, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
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