Talk:French cruiser Suchet/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:16, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• "opening ceremonies for the Bizerte canal " - If this is the name of a specific canal, Canal should be capitalized
  • Good catch
• "were mounted in sponsoned on" - Unless sponsoned is a technical term, I don't think it's the right word form. Google suggests it's a past tense verb form, which wouldn't be correct for this usage.
  • Fixed
• "These were placed aft, For close-range" - Either replace the comma with a period, or make it a semicolon and lowercase "For"
  • Apparently I forgot to finish the sentence I started...like I said at the other article, I'm losing my mind
• Link torpedo boats
  • It's linked earlier
• "the Venezuelan gunboat Restaurador was on leaving the harbor" - "was on leaving the harbor" doesn't read right.
  • Removed the stray "on"

2.

• AGF on book sources

3.

• Is the namesake known?
  • It's Louis-Gabriel Suchet, but as with Davout, nothing I've seen makes the connection.

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6.

• Image licensing tags look accurate.

7.

Not much to do on this one, placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 18:32, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 20:34, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 21:19, 11 May 2020 (UTC)