Talk:French cruiser Lavoisier/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 20:42, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

As expected, this article is in fine shape. I have a few comments:

~~Beginning i~~In 1903, she began
- Fixed
suggest "a decade of service onwith the Newfoundland"
- Done - must have been thinking "station" when I started writing the sentence
The Linois class were ordered to as part
- Fixed
the length and beam measurements don't match between the body and infobox
- Fixed
engines and range not in the infobox?
- Added
the TT conversion isn't rounded the same in the body and infobox
- Fixed
you could link armored cruiser
- Done
she alternated between patrolling the fisheries ~~with~~and making calls in ports
- Done
carrying a doctor for the French settlements on the islands? What islands?
- Clarified
suggest "Horta, Azores, Portugal"→"Horta in the Portuguese Azores"
- Works for me
move link to Dublin to first mention
- Done
suggest "Port Said, Egypt, on the 30th"
- Done
suggest "at Corfu in the Ionian Sea"
- Good idea
the link to U-28 is to the dab page, was this the German or A-H one?
- Good catch

That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:25, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks PM - some of these applied to the other ships as well, so hopefully that'll make those reviews easier when the time comes. Parsecboy (talk) 13:06, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:57, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]